The Raven but it's about a skateboard 🙂

Once upon a midnight dreary
While I skated, weak and weary.
Over many a quaint and curious volume
of forgotten boards-
While I slided, mostly slapping, suddenly
there came a cracking.
As of something suddenly snapping, snapping
the thing I most adore.
"Tis be hell" I muttered, breaking
yet another board-
Only this and nothing more

Ah, distinctly I remember it was in
the bleak December,
and each dying board wrought its
ghost upon the wall.
Eagerly I wished for tomorrow; mayby I have
a board to borrow.
From the great wall of sorrow - sorrow
for the broaken board-
Remembered here for evermore.

What would you tell us? 🤔

What do you mean?

I don t understand your poem…

Do you know about 'The Raven' - Edgar Allan Poe? What I did was just change some words so it's about my skateboard (that I broke) instead of Elenore (that Poe lost). Hope that makes it easier to understand 🙂

"Quoth the Board, Nevermore.”

Now i got it!😂

It's night
Deep and dark
Walking in the Park
To understand the world
Have you seen
The Light high in the Sky
Is filled with moonlight
Keep your way right
Your dreams become wide
That's the secret of moonlight

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